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24 March 2010 @ 01:13 am
A New Beginning - Human Doctor - 001: Beginnings  

Title: A New Beginning
Rating: FRT
Prompt: #001 - Beginnings for doctorwho_100 
Claim: Human Doctor
Spoilers: Only for “Journey’s End”
Character(s): Human Doctor, Rose Tyler, Jackie Tyler, Mara Everson (OFC)
Disclaimer: I do not own anything recognizable.

Summary: The TARDIS has just left and the human Doctor could feel the loss profoundly. And now he had the unfortunate pleasure of having to deal with something else.

A/N: Obviously this takes place after “Journey’s End”. I’m just one of those who does not believe in “happily ever after” for the Human Doctor and Rose. So I’m writing about it. Jackie is not going to be that prominent (though she will appear occasionally through my series; but Mara is my established OC and will be in there most of the time. She was there during my version of Rise of the Cybermen/Age of Steel and The Stolen Earth/Journey’s End (though I haven’t written those yet). To know more about her, my journal has a link to the series that features her and several other established fandom characters. 

 A/N2: And yes, it’s short and sweet. But it’s a start of something later on. 

 Bad Wolf Bay

He stood there for a moment, watching with regret and loss as the only home he ever knew faded away. It was a profound loss, something he hoped he never had to go through. But there it was – the loss of that familiar and comforting hum that had always been there for him. He did not like the fact that his proper self had left him here to basically rot, as part of some grand punishment for something they both knew the proper Doctor already did a couple lifetimes ago. Damn idiot if you ask me, he thought as he felt Rose’s hand slip from his. 

He knew that she was not happy about this. The fact that she practically ran from him to get to the fading TARDIS proved that. She worked hard to get back to him, building a dimension cannon to tear apart the walls separating the two universes in order to do so. Luckily, it did not work at first; but Davros and his stupid creations had to change that. She could have stayed in this universe for all he cared – as long as she was away from him. Not that he did not like her. He did like her – just as a friend. He stopped loving her when he regenerated, though she seem to not to notice. For goodness sake, she practically was upset that he was going to regenerate. Did she not know anything about him at all?  And she was becoming more selfish and uncaring as time went on.  When did she become like this?

Now he has to deal with her wrath. And make sure that he destroyed that cannon.  Of course, neither one was going to be easy, but he will make it through. Seeing her turning toward him, fury already emanating from her eyes, he knew that it was about to begin. “Why?” she asked.

“Why what?” he retorted back.

WHY DID HE LEAVE ME HERE?!” she cried. “Why did he leave me here with a cheap imitation?”

“Rose!” cried Jackie, who was standing a short distance from them.

What did you call me?” demanded the Doctor. “Do you think that I wanted to remain here too? I meant what I said to you – it would have ended with I love you. And I still do. But he moved on, as he hoped you would have had,” he started to explain.

“How can I move on? He was my life. My sole reason for continuing to live! What about what I want?” demanded Rose.

“Oh, so now everything revolves around you?” asked a musical voice that the Doctor knew was Mara Everson’s. The young journalist who aided him when he first came here and who followed Mickey and Jackie to a different universe just to help out. I have to stop thinking that I’m still him, he thought to himself as he took the young woman in. Slightly older now, her hair now curly and her eyes still gray and bright, she looked the same as ever. Though working for Torchwood had made her somewhat calloused.

Rose sent the woman a glare before turning back to the human Doctor. “Answer my question!” she demanded.

“I did. You just won’t listen,” was all he was going to say. Rose screamed in frustration as she turned her back to him and made her way toward the road.

“I hope you know that you have gotten yourself into,” commented Mara as she and Jackie stood next to him. “That daft woman is going to drive us all nuts!”

“Oi! Shush, Mara! We have enough problems at the moment without you and Rose going at it again,” complained Jackie as she looked after her daughter with sadness in her eyes.

“You two fought before?” he asked.

“More times than you can count,” answered Mara as she looked back up at him. “Pete can't stand her either. And don’t deny it, Jackie,” she added as she looked at the older woman. All Jackie could do was sigh.

“Well, we better catch up with her. Don’t need Rose complaining about being ditched again,” said the Doctor as the two women groaned and followed him toward the road. Okay, so life may not be hard for him after all. It will be different; but with Jackie and Mara (and most likely Pete), he may survive it.


 
 
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Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 25th, 2010 08:49 pm (UTC)
Personally, I think your OC needs to be established more into the fandom first though, you kind of just dumped her in there and said SURPRISE OC! It was a bit off. She may be established in the story and fandom in your head, but it isn't written yet, and if this story is going to be chaptered throughout all the prompts and not one shots, then maybe this wasn't the best place to start. Starting with when he met her would have been better. He would have met her shortly after being made, yeah? She comes from Pete's World, right?

Sorry. Other than that, I liked your portrayal of Rose. And the other Doctor. And that Jackie made it in there, because, yay, Jackie :P
jedimasterstar: pic#99227530jedimasterstar on March 26th, 2010 02:37 am (UTC)
Yeah, she comes from Pete's World.

Actually, I'm working on a story that has her meeting the original Doctor during the events of "Rise of the Cybermen"/"Age of Steel". She will probably come into play in the final two episodes of Series Two and she will be in "Stolen Earth"/"Journey's End". I thought about that after I posted it, but I was thinking backwards at that point (my mind is weird). I'll let you know when I post them!

Thanks! Don't apologize. I love criticism. It's just annoying fangirls I can't stand. Nice to know that you like my Jackie. I was worried since you were the expert (in my opinion). The next few stories will probably be mostly the Human Doctor and some Jackie, Pete, and once in a while Rose. My OC may not be back for a while in these stories (until I get the already meeting her part done).

Time to end this long reply (hehe).
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 26th, 2010 04:45 am (UTC)
Yeah, she comes from Pete's World.

Okay, makes a bit more sense now (your other stories with her are in fandoms I either don't like or have no interst in :P) So it's good to know that came through enough with what you had written.

I'm guessign the RotC/AoS ones won't be part fo this series, as they don't involve Alt!Ten.

And I'm an expert in something? Yay! :P I'll be looking out for more, especially with Jackie in it :P

jedimasterstar: pic#99012537jedimasterstar on March 26th, 2010 05:09 am (UTC)
That cool. I'm a person who can't stick to just one fandom exclusive half the time. I need to hop around once in a while.

No, it's not. It's probably going to go under my occhallenge tables. As probably will the other episodes if I think about it.

I'll doing alt!Jackie first then our Jackie. I'm probably going to broaden alt!Jackie's appearance a bit before she goes "Cyberman". And I'll be bringing at more of the real Rose while I'm at it. She's going to have some competition for a bit!
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 26th, 2010 05:11 am (UTC)
Ooh! Competition! Interesting :P

A love interest for our dear new Doctor stuck in the alt!world?

And yay to both Jackie's. Just remeber that alt!Jackie was a lot fiercer and demanding than normal Jackie.
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 26th, 2010 05:21 am (UTC)
Yay! I love both Jackie's.

Love interest - I was thinking that way. She's not going to be dependent on him and will keep him on his toes. You'll just have to see.
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 26th, 2010 05:26 am (UTC)
Sounds like River! I like the River/Doctor pairing. That's the type of relationship he can have with someone.

I was going to make the Doctor move on from Rose and go to River in Help!, but I don't know...guess it'll happen if it happens and won't if it isn't meant to be.
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 26th, 2010 05:35 am (UTC)
I didn't think of it like that. It is the kind of relationship he can have. *has to go watch Serenity and get Firefly series*

Go for it! It should be interesting to read. Which reminds me, I have to catch up on Help! and review for a change. Been bad girl on that.
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 26th, 2010 05:40 am (UTC)
Help! is on the back burner for a little bit longer. I've almost finished writing my Big Bang fic now. 15 000 words. I think it may be another 5000 words long, maybe a bit longer. My first got to 23 000... another month to go, and then the story will end.

Jack's happy, he just discovered the wonderful world of sex. With someoen else. With full penetration :P

He was too afraid of commitment up to that point to go very far.
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 26th, 2010 05:45 am (UTC)
Take your time. I'll still catch up.

You got to tell me when you post that. And I have to find that community. Should be interesting.

I'm glad he's happy with someone else. He deserves it. And thanks for that lovely visual (lol).
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 26th, 2010 06:00 am (UTC)
Hehehe in my head she looks like an older (25-30) Rani Chandra. Yeah I know, weird :P But more round, instead of sharp, like Rani is...if that made sense.

And the big bang community is closed for sign ups right now (only peopel who join can sign up and there's a window) but it can be found Here.

Oh, and I'm signing up to the occhallenge, using Jeremy as my OC :P
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 27th, 2010 03:36 am (UTC)
Have I read about Jeremy?

I got confused for a second. Does my character remind you of Rani or your character in your big bang story?
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 27th, 2010 04:47 am (UTC)
The character of Katie in my Big Bang novel. Not your character. And the character she looks like in my head is a taller version of the girl in The Ood Planet, except not evil. She more acts like I imagine an adult Rani would :P I was confusing myself there.

And Jeremy, yes you've read about him, if you read Help! :P

Pretty sure I had him as born in the 32nd century of Earth, but brought through the rift to 20th century Earth in the late 70's. Works for UNIT in the care and guidance of benign Alien beings trapped or waiting on Earth for rescue or the repair of their ship. He also serves as psychiatrist to humans who have dealt with aliens and didn't know how to cope with it.

Also he's married in his new century, with an adult son. He was too involved with his work before the rift got to him, to have started a relationship and decided to change that. He was young back then. Haven't got a name for his wife yet, but the son is called Frank :P

Roughly 60 years old, but because of his slightly more superior physiology, has a longer lifespan, and looks to be about in his mid 40's.

His wife really needs a name now...
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 28th, 2010 11:03 pm (UTC)
I was wondering.

Jeremy sounds interesting. Now I am going to read Help!

You go name his wife while I try to figure out what to name the Human Doctor (poor guy needs a name).
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 29th, 2010 01:48 am (UTC)
I've decided to name the wife Meredith, though that might change by the time I get to writing.
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 29th, 2010 11:15 pm (UTC)
I just had a weird thought and thought I should share it.

I was thinking of what the Master would be like if he was human.

No idea why I thought of that.
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 29th, 2010 11:34 pm (UTC)
XD I wrote a short story on that for a ficathon once as a pinch hitter. I was going to continue it on into a big story which would ultimately be an Alt!Ten/Harry Saxon story, with maybe a bit of a threesome involving Rose :P

jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 30th, 2010 12:08 am (UTC)
I doubt Rose would've shared. That could have been messy.

Hm, maybe I should write one sometime.
Malice Haughton/SilverWolf7malicehaughton on March 30th, 2010 01:49 am (UTC)
XD He can tell her that the Master was his lover first, so she'll just have to put up with it. Or, go away and leave them to happy homoerotic happiness :P
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on March 30th, 2010 02:09 am (UTC)
LOL!